For this weeks blog I am going to be sharing my Narrative writing story. In a couple of blogs ago I did a blog about my Narrative planning for my story. I have now completed my story and will be sharing it with you guys.
Here is my first paragraphs from my narrative
It was the year 1995 on one cold and wintery day. Once there was a house, a little house.
In that house lived a little family, There was a mother,her daughter called Rose and son called Will .
They did have a father but he unfortunately had died in a car crash. One day the weirdest thing happened.
Rose woke up and had the weirdest question fixed in her mind. What is going to happen in the future?.
When she asked her mother she said she didn’t know how to answer.
Will overheard Rose and came running out wanting to know the answer to the question,
Mother answered, “You know what, I don’t know what’s going to happen”.
The kids look at each other confused. “ What do you think is going to happen? ” said mother.
I think I’m going to grow big and tall and I’m going to get a job” said Rose. “ What about you Will? ”
asked mother.” I think Robots are going to take over the world and we will all die!”
“Don’t be silly” said mother. “But It’s true I will die” Said Will . “Everyone dies” said mother sadly.
In that house lived a little family, There was a mother,her daughter called Rose and son called Will .
They did have a father but he unfortunately had died in a car crash. One day the weirdest thing happened.
Rose woke up and had the weirdest question fixed in her mind. What is going to happen in the future?.
When she asked her mother she said she didn’t know how to answer.
Will overheard Rose and came running out wanting to know the answer to the question,
Mother answered, “You know what, I don’t know what’s going to happen”.
The kids look at each other confused. “ What do you think is going to happen? ” said mother.
I think I’m going to grow big and tall and I’m going to get a job” said Rose. “ What about you Will? ”
asked mother.” I think Robots are going to take over the world and we will all die!”
“Don’t be silly” said mother. “But It’s true I will die” Said Will . “Everyone dies” said mother sadly.
It was a lot of work to finish my story but I'm very happy that I got it done.
Have you ever written a story about the future?
Hope you enjoyed this blog
Bye!
Hi Olivia, I like the way that you have used lots of speech and that you have used lots of amazing describing words. You reminded me of when I did a narrative piece of writing in year six. Next time instead of just using simple words like I and the you could extend your vocabulary for the start of your sentences. Overall it was amazing, your such a good writer.
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