Writing

Hello and welcome back to my blog,

 

For this week we kept on working on our narrative stories. We have started our story's. For my story I'm try to write 6-7 paragraphs.  I've started my story and I'm really happy with how it's going. On my last Writing blog I shared my planning for my writing.

Here is my first 2 paragraphs

 I walk into the room as it goes silent. I look around wondering where to go next. 

I’ve looked everywhere. Up stairs, Down stairs, every room. There’s nothing to be seen. 

I double check everywhere. Still Nothing to be seen. I start to stress as I need to hurry before someone comes back. I went through every room to check I didn’t miss anything.

I walk down the hall as I hear a sound as I think someone is entering the house. I run onto the room I first see. I close the door behind me slowly so I don’t make a sound. 

I look around the room as I see something strange in the corner of the room. 

I walk slowly towards the corner, It looks as if a tile on the ground has come off. 

I kneel down onto the ground as I take a closer look at the tile. I reach down to touch the tile. 

The tile pops out. There was a piece of paper under the gap. On the piece of paper it says,

“I’ve left you something special in the attic”. I wondered what attic this person was talking about. When I was looking around the house I didn’t see an attic anywhere. 

Hope you enjoyed this blog.

Do you like writing stories?

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